Thursday, March 6, 2008

Awedly Penned vs. Oddly Pinned

Admiration is both the title and the first word in an essay that Gabriela recently wrote in school. During a scheduled and routine conference today, Gabriela's teacher shared with us this unexpected expression of wonderment. Here is the essay:


Ari's preferred mode of narration is a bit more abstract. He often sits at the computer and crafts short poems, and once in a while he engages in mesmerizing displays of performance art. A few evenings ago, while tidying up the kitchen, I turned around and found myself face to face with a provocative portrayal...a curious chronicle of Ari's relationship with Daniela. He too was providing support, literally and in his own way. Upper incisors anchored in the retral portion of the styrofoam neck...lower incisors delicately balancing the bottom of the bust, he just stood there. I asked him to hold the pose, and quickly woke the camera napping on the dinning room table. Here is the exposition:

4 comments:

Paola said...

Brava Gabri ! Tu ed Ariel siete per mamma una forza straordinaria. Ti abbraccio forte . Zia Paola

Anonymous said...

I have just read your entire blog and wanted to tell you what a wonderful experience it was to read it. I will be having surgery on March 21st for breast cancer at Georgetown University. Your postings have made me want to jounal my experience as well. Thank you for sharing your experience.

(Ken) said...

Dear Anonymous,
We will be thinking of you...especially on the 21st of March, and wish for a successful outcome and a speedy recovery.

If you want to learn about some wonderful writing programs at the Lombardi Center, I have added a link on the blog's sidebar.

All the best and thank you for the kind words,
(Ken)

Motownrunner said...

This is so sweet. Gracias por compartir. Margarita